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Old 03-04-2004, 11:06 AM
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You were all waiting for it! I wrote a fanfic!

It's just one chapter at the moment but I currently have 2 weeks off so I'll add to it whenever I can. Check it out and tell me what you think of it... really! If you don't like it tell me! (bearing in mind that I'm only 13)
If you want to be in it, tell me! lol
Ok... enjoy!
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Old 04-04-2004, 08:09 PM
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It now has 2 full chapters
I'll add more tomorrow... maybe
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Old 05-04-2004, 06:54 PM
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its pretty good
i felt the chapters were a little short and at some point you should describe what the characters look like
but other than those two things i thought it was good
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Old 06-04-2004, 12:44 AM
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its good. r u going to be in it, or r one of the characters already u? can i be in it?
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Old 06-04-2004, 07:43 AM
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All my characters are already in it. I'm gonna build up to descriptions etc. later and yeah ton, you can be in it
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Old 06-04-2004, 05:15 PM
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k just though id help
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Old 07-04-2004, 12:21 AM
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I read some of it and its alright. I wanted to know if i could be in it. Im also new here and i thought this would be a great opportunity to do something.
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Old 07-04-2004, 12:23 AM
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I read some of it and its alright. I wanted to know if i could be in it. Im also new here and i thought this would be a great opportunity to do something.
hey welcome to the site

and Faulkie if you need more chars you can include some of mine
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Old 07-04-2004, 12:25 AM
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Old 07-04-2004, 02:03 AM
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Not bad....for you Faulkie j/k
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